We went passed Taipa and Mangonui so when I was still bored then I had a headache so I went to sleep and I woke up when my mum and dad and I was at kawakawa. So we went passed kawakawa and I saw this sprayed van so a few minutes later we were talking about me, mum and dad, moving but I didn't wanna so I had a 10-minute sleep
Hi Billy Ray, I liked how you said that you had gone passed Taipa and Mangonui on the way to Whangarei (great detail).
ReplyDeleteI also liked that you used capital letters for most of the place names.
Maybe next time you could try to add some describing words (adjectives).