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Wednesday, 3 June 2020

Something Alive

There is a book and it's called something alive. It's a graphic novel where there is a girl and she talks about her from only one place and so her grandmother came from across the lands and seas. When she goes to school she says that her accent blends well with the other students and people ask where she is really from. In some way it's easier for her. She says that her dad's face looks like her grandfather's japanese face. But there's still a misunderstand and she dresses up in amour,blood,swords or casts me in chrome as a product of some imaginary superfuture. She feels like a badly haiku doesn't mean the same english she's mostly lived in the southern islands she feels lost in New Zealand and japan . People always ask her questions about Japan. Others expect her to answer every question that comes towards her and it's frustrating to hear things I've never known my whole life . She often feels like she's not enough as the dilation makes her blood less somehow but now her grandmother calls New Zealand home. It always has not been easy for her but she made a great life. When shes feeling lost she goes to her family. My grandmother proud to be a japanese and to live in New ZealandDate 03.06.2020


5 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Billyray, this is an excellent piece of mahi. I can see your writing progress very clearly in your use of correct sentence punctuation and the amount of writing you have produced. Well done!

    When you wrote that the main character often feels like she's not enough because of the dilution of her blood, what do you think this means?

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  2. holy Jarvis that's heaps of writing this is your best blog post in my opinion,

    the only thing I would do to the story board is make the top 3 storyboard frames as big as the other ones.

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  3. Hi Billy.
    I like how you used the storyboard and the writing to back it up. I feel like there would be a gap of interest with out the storyboard. Maybe next time you could work on you grammar but otherwise it was a really good post. How well did you enjoy the book? And if you were the main character then how would you have felt? Would it have been any different? And how would you rate the book 1/10? I enjoyed reading your post.
    Sincerely Dr. Joshua D. B.

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  4. but you can still tap on the picture so it's ok

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  5. nice summery and storyboard it looks amazing =)

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